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Sadness
The darkness falls
Making me fall with it
Into a abyss
No man would go
Down
Down
Down
Down
Into it’s eternal hell
Down
Down
Down
A black mist shrouds my mind
Life has no meaning
Love is hate
Light becomes darkness
And I
Keep falling
Down
~The Potator
This is sadness in word form.....Life can become hatred...Comment Plz!
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Thecoolbluehair Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2009
i didn't know u write stuffs..................

u should write more
was good
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HAPPY-kokoro Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2008
so deep...
i didnt know the potator could manage such a thing ._.
nice poem btw :D
and you sound like my friend sammy
who always writes sad poems...
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sir-leader-sama Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2008
its so deep....i love it...
you need more of these!!!!
not necessarily emo ones, but cool ones!!
yeah...
XD
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potatoman7 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2008
tys all!
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TeamNarutox Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2008
I agree....
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xSasorixThexPuppetx Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2008
Cool. Great poem!
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